Feedback for improvements

We showed the class our first cut on Monday the 6th December.
At this point our sequence was still very much un finished, we had not finished editing and not all of our titles were correct, we got the following feedback;

• To change the production company logo, and to make it bigger.
• Add faded between the pans to make it flow better.
• Add music- which was our main prority
• Add a car sound at the end of the sequence
• Add more footage or dialouge

As we had under a week to complete these changes we had to proritise, and work out what would be most benificial to our production.